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This is my character Neka who is a bobcat skin walker for my school project.
This is only a wip of him so he still needs work. I had asked for help earlier, but I no longer need help with it. I know what I have to change.
thank you everyone who offered their help.

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~FireHearthWolf Dec 16, 2012
well. I know you didn't ask for help but I will say it anyway: I think that the bow is too smal. A bow that size coudn't shoot an arrow more than 50 meters, if you are lucky. The ideal bow too long range shooting, like needed for hunting or a long range battle, would be this one: The longbow [link]
That bow would be more of a battle, close range bow, that doesn't need to be strong, but fast and easly carried arond.
If you don't want ANY help, please ignore my comment and i am sorry for any grammar errors, I am not a natural english speaker.
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~Korosu-Sienne Nov 21, 2012
Okay. I haven't had the time to draw examples, but on anatomy and stuff alone I would say the side view legs (the calves are too curved at the front, I think, the foot nearest to the viewer should be further back) and the 3/4 chin (his face looks a little offset from his neck).
I'm sorry I'm so late, since it's irrelevant now, hopefully you get a good grade :)
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*KeitiBlackWhiteWolf Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no idea if this will help any...
you were looking on coloring, right?
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also not mentioned that i did, the one on the far right - his/her mouth should be a little further up on their face, and i added the other side that you would see on that angle.

and i know its a WIP, but i wasnt sure wat you did or didnt plan on doing so i added stuff like the hair and such~
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*NatsumeWolf Nov 19, 2012
thanks, but I am having my teacher do it since I looked at everyones tips and I noticed its just everyone putting it into their own style. I have my own style, I am not going to try and copy off of anyone elses style XP
But thank you any way, but I realized that I need a professionals help, not people who are at my skill level and a little higher.
I thought this would help since you all know my style better than my teachers ... but lol it just made a mess. Thanks again for your help though ^^
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*KeitiBlackWhiteWolf Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay, and youre welcome. [:
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*KeitiBlackWhiteWolf Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
opp, and i lied. the one on the far left..the shoulder shouldnt be shaded in the back, it should be light.
mah bad. twas quick. xD
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~wolf-of-happiness Nov 18, 2012
cool drawing
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~xKOVAKtheWOLFx Nov 15, 2012
I would have o suggest to make the bobcat's pelted face smaller when its on the human.. To me, it looks rather large, or simply make the legs longer.
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~puregothwolf Nov 15, 2012
I hope the pic I sent help :hug: :heart:
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~ScarletWolf21 Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Always love your art, I don't really see what he might hav a problem with.
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